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The Eternal Quagmire

No time for love – Are you single? Do you have no one to pat your back when you achieve something?  Are you looking for friendship with any damn girl? Do you have those eternal cravings for those long lost hugs? Are you alone this valentine?

Suddenly she calls you, curses you badly. Unexpectedly the sky around become dusky, there’s no one to stroll in the park, there’s no one to go shopping, there’s only that vague shadow of her…

She is there near you; still you feel so less of her. You are running from life, running away from your own shadow, restlessly spending time doing nothing, just nothing. The sky outside your balcony is sunny but you are gladly hiding behind the shrubs.

Everybody is moving ahead, you are just getting down the stairs, everyone’s touching the heavens, and you are still rotting there. You write love letters, compose stories, you sometimes sing but she is so unaware of your feelings, she just love to curse you day in day out.

For god’s sake stop scribbling emotional pages of fiction – she says with utter frustration. He smiles, stands up and hugs her. They go for a long ride, watches the most romantic movie. They are a sweet couple, they keep fighting, they keep rejoining, they just love to pester one another. Sometimes they take a break from the monotonous urban life and escapes to their respective small towns. She is so practical while he never wakes up from his dream. He keeps weaving magical stories, she keeps gazing at him. He loves the absurdity while she praises the beauty. They both have no similar taste yet they mingle so brilliantly. He wakes up from his long slumber, finds her near his arms. Kisses are rosy cheeks and bids farewell to that beautiful dream….

It happens when you are in love, it only happens to you, it never allows your partner know, it just makes you crazy, you just become so lost between the reality and fiction. The eternal quagmire lingers on…

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17 comments:

  1. it happens only in love, and when in love what matters is just that you are in love. I liked it, appreciate the emotions and the narration.

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  2. Thanks for the appreciation! You can post your story too here :)

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  3. lovely writeup pallav.....the words have a certain feel to them which is special :)

    cheers

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  4. oh yes, love and its paths like a maze.. sometimes the love you are wanting is right next to you and yet you can't see it. nice one, loved the narration! :)

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  5. Thanks Clueless and Leo. True, love is like a maze. It's special :)

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  6. very well written...and well an intriguing case of love you have presented...nice

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  7. Wonderfully written, as always!

    And, sigh! No time for love!

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  8. love n lovely fights! just wonderful :)

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  9. Said in the every Pallav way! Grea poem bro! Keep Rocking as always! :)

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  10. Simply beautiful, PiperMan :)
    Here's my story:
    http://fu-ck-lo-ve.blogspot.com/2011/02/fire-freeze-moment-of-my-life.html#comments

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  11. All in the game called life. Love, hate, curse, praise and what not.... Good one mate!

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  12. WOW!!!....it has every emotion of Love...so sweet...another awesome post from your diary..loved it!!

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  13. Hi - visiting after a long time - you ve captured the many facets,moods and emotions quite well.
    Cheers
    GB

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  14. very gripping, touchy, and vibrant one.
    very well visualized the intricacies.
    speechless is the word.

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  15. the very beautiful part of love you have described. it happens mostly, with yet so different still so much in love. thats what only love can give you in life. that is to bind with someone who is very different from yourself, which is not to compete with you but yeah to complete you in every walk of life. its beautiful. best wishes

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  16. Beautifully written. Be-a-utifully written. You struck a major chord somewhere. Kudos!

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